Throw me a line Try as I might, I cannot find an adequate last line for the lyric entitled Terriblisma (
http://primroseport.livejournal.com/60737.html). Gentle reader, write one for me*.
Here are the last three lines:
How it almost looked like art when their city flew apart
Like a painting of a sunset on the sea
They were haiku on a page, mere catharsis on a stage
[???]The rhyme scheme dictates that the last word should rhyme with sea. Loose or slant rhymes are acceptable. The line should follow the cadence of the "like a painting" line. It preferably should reinforce the notion of terriblisma.
* The curator--that is, me--reserves the right to refuse service to anyone for any reason.
(An immense tableau vivant of misery?)