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The King in Yellow: Interludes
Il Re Giallo: Interludi


The only good place is a no place
New Good Place, No Place review available here. It's funny when the two bands someone compares you to are both ones you don't like. Maybe "funny" is not the right word. But--a favorable review, nonetheless.


The Three Scariest Novels
Song of Kali, Dan Simmons. A writer goes to Calcutta, taking his wife and baby along, to track down a celebrated poet who vanished eight years ago, presumed dead. He should have stayed home.
Let's Go Play At The Adams', Mendal W. Johnson. A young woman babysits a group of children for seven days. On the first day, she wakes up bound to the bed. There are six more days.
Johnny Got His Gun, Dalton Trumbo. During The Great War, a soldier wakes up in a hospital and slowly realizes that he has lost his arms, legs, his entire face, and his hearing. And that's chapter one.

Runners-up:
House of Leaves, Mark Z. Danielewski. An award-winning photojournalist discovers that his new house is a fraction of an inch larger on the inside than the outside. Soon, a door opens up in the wall where no door had been. What can a man do but explore?
Deathbird Stories (Short Stories), Harlan Ellison. Forgotten gods die; new gods are born. We have reason to miss the old gods.

To Be Continued

Tell me the scariest novels you have ever read.


Wind Whistles Through a Skull
Blue Sky Theory wins some praise from this reviewer.

An earlier reviewer raised an interesting point when, with apparent confidence, he explained to his readers that the narrative was set entirely in a post-apocalyptic world. Though that is incorrect (technically, the world ends during the song The Smash), I would that it were the truth. Too many songs were nixed on the way to the final cut, and most of those were the post-apoc songs, making the album front-heavy with the pre-apoc. But who's to say the world hasn't ended, to a certain extent, before the first word is heard? Tomorrow, out of curiosity, I will read the album in its entirety, with new eyes, and see whether the reviewer was right, or whether there is any way to know for sure. I am tempted to re-imagine The Lionhead Nation as the proudest and least damaged realm in a ruined or quickly decaying world, the last mighty country, but a country rotting from the inside and surrounded by lawlessness and chaos about its boundaries. It makes perhaps a little more sense, then, why they would desire to make war with the remainder of the world's crumbling nations and establish for themselves an empire. If I could go back, I'd make this re-imagining evident.


Thistleeden, the story
I am writing a story based on the lyric Thistleeden. Expect Dunsanian fantasy.

"...And about it in a wide ring lay Beel-wa-Zouth the New District, though it is as old as song. Many shades of pink is Beel-wa-Zouth, and pale blue and yellow, and in some places pale orange, and here and there buildings tiled bright red or turquoise jut amongst their pastel neighbors, so to one who beholds the district from a nearby hill, the noon sun shines on it like to a cliff of pink chalk studded with quartz, but at sunset Beel-wa-Zouth appears to deepen to a roseate glow and its silhouette is lost amidst the red sky. Over the district peer minarets adorned with mosaics of rolling waves tessellated one in the other, or clusters of nautilus, or fish scales, and the flagstone streets are set with flat shells and lined with grids of pearls, and the scalloped plazas are of pink marble veined with blue, watched over by hoary bronze sculptures of horse-headed fish standing on their tails and five-pointed stars, green with patina..."
(Page 2)


New thing





Added a stanza to Things. Thanks for your suggestions.


The Things They Made
Things [Draft 2.5]


John Moses Browning ascended to heaven
Gripping in each fist a 1911
Muzzle-flash lightning and gunpowder thunder
John Moses Browning at war with his brethren
Alfred Nobel as a dead jester rises
Clad in singed whiskers and sooty disguises
Fuses of dynamite sparkle in one hand
While from the other he offers us prizes
Winchester's wife is entombed in her labyrinth
Drowning her guilt in a green pond of absinthe
Victims pursue her with slow, shambling vengeance
Down on the ground floor and up on the seventh
Poor Oppenheimer, his hunched apparition
Kneels in the desert, bemoaning ambition
Rips up his notes like a modern Pandora
Shrinks from a dawn that reminds him of fission
The things they made
Now we're left with the things they made
Harold P. Brown now presides over Hades
Slumped in the throne he and Edison made
He's lord of the convicts, his brass eyes electric
Burn through the shackled men, shocking the ladies
Mikhail Kalashnikov weeps in his tower
A metal and wooden carnivorous flower
Craning its neck over ten-million tombstones
Every new death only adds to its power
Poisonous mist clings to Fritz Haber's eyrie
Barren the hills where he hides, grim and wary
Wreathed in chlorine when he sighs like a dragon
Broken and bowed from the shame he must carry
John Moses Browning ascended to heaven
Gripping in each fist a 1911
Muzzleflash lightning and gunpowder thunder
John Moses Browning at war with his brethren
The things they made
Now we're left with the things they made


Regretful inventors
I am writing a lyric about inventors who regretted having loosed their inventions on the world. So far, I have included Alfred Nobel, Sarah Winchester (though she felt guilty by association), and J. Robert Oppenheimer.

Can you think of anyone I've forgotten?

Thanks for the Kalashnikov suggestion, Moppy.

EDIT: I'm also accepting applications for inventors who had little or no regrets, but whose inventions everyone else regrets.


Throw me a line
Try as I might, I cannot find an adequate last line for the lyric entitled Terriblisma (http://primroseport.livejournal.com/60737.html). Gentle reader, write one for me*.

Here are the last three lines:

How it almost looked like art when their city flew apart
Like a painting of a sunset on the sea
They were haiku on a page, mere catharsis on a stage
[???]


The rhyme scheme dictates that the last word should rhyme with sea. Loose or slant rhymes are acceptable. The line should follow the cadence of the "like a painting" line. It preferably should reinforce the notion of terriblisma.

* The curator--that is, me--reserves the right to refuse service to anyone for any reason.

(An immense tableau vivant of misery?)


Triage
Triage [Draft 2]


Take this, my splinted arm
And add my weight to yours
I'm a snail leaving a trail of slime
I'm crawling on all fours
Got the tunnel-vision of trench rats
The solitude of the deaf
My lungs are bags of mustard gas
Can you smell it on my breath?
I'm through with playing hopscotch
Dodging mines on two bum legs
I'm through with dancing foxtrot
No more mumbling the peg
I'm leaking like a colander
Cork my bright wine with a thumb
Bullets bored their keyholes red
The stigmata of the gun
The air sweats smoke and vinegar
The earth rolls like a drum
The sky deigns not to fall down
It gapes motionless and glum
I'm clutching at Old Slabsides
And there's one left in the pipe
I may ride it into heaven
If salvation's overripe
Take this, my splinted arm
And add my weight to yours
Let's slither between the salvos
Let the triage run its course
They'll cleanse our wounds with maggots
They'll sew us up with thread
They'll mummy-wrap our injuries
And stretch us among the dead


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